Now that I have the internet back, I decided to drop in and update this writing journal. First of all, I'm closing in towards the end. The draft is still horrendous but I got a lot of ideas on how to fix that and I'm chomping at the bit to finish editing. It's so hard to stop everything and finish it but everyone tells me that I won't get an accurate picture of my mistakes if I doin't finish it. So I'm plowing on. I actually got one more chapter left, plus the epilouge and I'm a little nervous about writing the confrontation between Aster and the main bad guy Alberto Falcone. I mostly going to put a fight tag on it and keep on rolling.

I'm also dreading planning out and writing out the fight scenes. I think they are going to be at least three, and the one I just wrote last chapter was so fucked up I ended up just putting a note that there was a fight scene there and kept on rolling. I'm actually a bit scared of the second draft. I'm not taking a lot of time off between the first and second draft. I tried to do that the last time I finished a draft, and I just couldn't finish it. All my motiviation was gone.

Not taking a chance this time. I should start posting the second draft after I have a buffer going. So probably sometime in mid July or August.